Unsung *NPAC nominee March 04*
UnsungA full moon brings the gift of removal,the calm exterior shell I wear crackswith the moons pull and falls away clean.Striped bare in the cool blue light,revealed for one who may see,a woman of...
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Very beautiful. I especially like the first stanza. Lovely metaphores...
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Hello, Rouge ~ An enjoyable read. I liked the imagery of hiding behind a new shell each day. Nicely written!Cheers!HarryPlease come visit me at www.gillelands.com/poetry/ and check out my new book at...
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Very Enjoyable. Makes me look at the sky in a whole new lightStripped of all inhibitionsThe moon waxed offIts outer skinRevealing ........
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I like this very much, Rouge; seems to me (a mere man) to capture something very important in the relations between the sexes (?).Much enjoyed.Davie
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HH-I'm glad you liked itRougeDavieYou are rightRouge
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Hey Red. This one has some subtle undertones as well. To me at least. I enjoyed it very much.Yours, Darkhttp://members.fortunecity.com/twilbur7/shadowdancer.jpgClick on pic to see my new book, "The...
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Love the concept of unsung need, and really enjoyed the 'voice' and language - excellent!"A poem...begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness...It finds the...
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Soon the moons pull will wane anda new shell will form, hiding awaythis woman of pure unsung need.very inviting and lovely poem.
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ValoeUm, thank you. Oh Lord. Must of done something rightRougeGalaEEKRouge
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I loved the title of this poem written in a very unique and beautiful way! Congrads on your nomination! Jo
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